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IMAZOMBIE_358: this would be hot if;

her tits werent the size of basketballs
red lipstick and kiss marks
her face is meh

Archanid: "Red lipstick and kiss marks" what? "Weren't there?" "Were bigger/smaller/different color?" You don't have a descriptor.

Also, even if her face is meh, it's still a professional grade contribution (no offense to our amateurs - keep going guys! You get better with every picture!)

Gemma: There is nothing wrong with constructive criticism so long as it is that and doesn't descend into just insulting the piece.

Archanid: @Gemma: indeed. Bonus points if the constructive criticism includes HOW to improve!